The One That Got Away-Chapter 9: HongKong

Chapter 9: HongKong

Richard and Maya landed in HongKong in the afternoon. Maya is busy unpacking their clothes in their luggages while Richard keeps busy checking his emails.

She took her notebook out, excited with her plans for the whole week with him. She smiled as she pictures what might happen on the upcoming days. Shopping, long hours of walking and riding the local transportation with him, surely it’ll be fun!

Maya glances at her husband and found him occupied with his emails. She slowly approaches him and sat beside him on their bed. “Uh.. Sweetheart, can we go shopping later after dinner? Masaya kasi mamili dito sa gabi di ba?” She asked him sweetly.

“Uh yes, their night market.”

“So, oo na?”

“Yes, yes. I am also bored here”

Maya shrieks inside her head and made a mental list of the things that she wanted to buy for her family and house helpers.
~~

The couple’s hotel is near the Temple Street Night Market so as soon as the sun goes down, Maya and Richard went to enjoy the night market.

Yau Ma Tei, Kowloon where the night market is located is filled with people all over the world , the traders have already laid out their wares and the opera singers and fortune tellers begin to emerge when the couple arrived.

Trinkets, tea ware, electronics, watches, menswear, jade and antiques are scrutinised and haggled over, while claypot rice, seafood, noodles and other treats are consumed with gusto.

Temple Street Night Market is an enduring example of the festivity of a Chinese market. Maya is happily strolling around while pulling Richard behind her. She was all smiles while Richard kept on looking around, scanning all the people around them. Maya didn’t notice this strange action from her husband, she’s busy stopping and shopping.

“Ricky! Look! Should I buy this blouse? Cute no?” She asked, and she noticed that Richard is staring on his left side. She shifted her eyes to glance at where he is looking at and only found a group of people chatting.

“Bakit? Anong meron dun?” She asked him which startled Richard

“Ah.. W-wala. What were you saying?”

“Sabi ko, if I should buy this ba?” She held high the blouse.

“Uh. Yeah.” He answered, his mind still occupied. “Are we done? Madami na din tayo nabili and we have a week here anyway. Just buy that and go back to the hotel for the room service, okay?” He said.

“Wait. Aalis ka? Saan ka pupunta?”

“I will.. I just..need to.. Uh.. I will meet a possible client who happens to be here. He’s near na din naman and he said that it’s okay with him if we meet tonight. Don’t worry, saglit lang ako.” He told her. Maya unconvincingly nodded her head. She can’t do anything about it anyway.

“Alright. But sweetheart, saglit ka lang ha?”

He nodded and bid goodbye to her before he finally left her. Maya couldn’t explain what she is feeling. There is something wrong. She watches as Richard walks away from her and as the crowd engulfs him and after a few, he is nowhere in sight. Maya could ony heave a sigh and to hope that her instinct was wrong.
~~

“Hi miss, are you alone?” He pulled her by her waist and whispered to her ears which made the lady to blush.

“Actually no. I am looking for someone. Sabi nya kasi he’s around here somewhere.” She told him sweetly.

“Oh. Kaya pala nagmamadali syang makita ka. I bet he misses you a lot.” He kissed her on her forehead and embrace her.

“I miss you, Chard” she hugged him back. “Uh.. Can you come with me? I wanna buy something sana eh. Let’s stroll.”

“Uhh.. I think that’s not a good idea, Sandy. Why don’t we just hang around your hotel room? Di ba, I already arranged your hotel para malapit lang din.”

“She’s also shopping here, isn’t she?” Sandy asked casually

“Yup. So.. Uh.. ”

“It’s alright, Chard. Let’s just go to my room.” She seductively whispered to his ear and gave it a kiss before pulling him away from the crowd.

Sandy told her co-FA’s that she will be staying in with her relatives in HongKong so she won’t stay with them anymore. It was all Richard’s plan for he wanted to spend some alone time with her as well. And that night, they shared a quality time together while Maya ate alone inside their hotel room staring at the sky wishing to the stars that may her wish be granted. Her long time wish.
~~~~

She is sitting on her side of the bed waiting for Richard. It’s been 4hrs already since he left her for a meeting with his possible client that night. She just can’t help but to think different scenarios that she hates to happen.

“Richard, asan ka na ba?” She keeps on asking while her thumb is busy typing a message for him.

She stood up and starts pacing back and forth. Why is it that every night, she is like this? She can’t sleep while he is not beside her. It is really hard when you’re not secured. Simple things will never stop bothering you.
~~~

Around three in the morning, she stirs on her bed. As she slowly open her eyes, she was surprised to find a sleeping Richard beside her. He seems so tired as it looked like when he got back, he just slumped on their bed and sleep. He is still wearing the same polo shirt that he is wearing earlier and his pants and socks were still on. Normally, Richard would sleep in his pajamas.

Maya examined his face. His eyes were closed. He is so handsome and cute. Like a child peacefully sleeping that you will never want to disturb. His nose that is tempting to be pinched and his lips.. That lips of his that is waiting to be kissed.

She leans in to give it a soft and gentle kiss but stopped from doing so when her eyes landed on his neck. She immediately sat back and stared at it again.

She is so sure, it is not hers. There is a kiss mark on his neck. Heck! She racked her mind trying to recall if he is meeting with a girl client but as far as she could remember, he told her that it is a “HE” so it is a guy, right? Did they drank and went to a bar to unwind before going home?

Maybe he just gave in to his client’s request to drink and to mingle with girls so that he could win his possible client’s trust?? Right, that’s just it, Maya. He is not cheating on you. The last time that he did was way back when you guys are not yet married and they are nothing serious.

She closed her eyes while trying to convince herself. She sighs. Slowly, she stood up to get a tissue on the comfort room and went back to Richard to wipe that kiss mark on his neck. That bloody lip stick stain. “I won’t give up on us, Ricky. I believe on us. I love you.” She whispered on the sleeping figure of Richard and dozed off to sleep afterwards.
~~~~~~~

happy mom’s day yesterday to our moms and to the moms out there. :’) I am trying to update fast but my sched won’t let me. Sorry. Happy reading anyway. 😀

 

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60 thoughts on “The One That Got Away-Chapter 9: HongKong

  1. Maya nman umalis ka nah. Wag kang magpaktanga.. Sh****** kainis ka richard ay ikaw nman sandy sana mlaman yanh pinaggawa mo sa pra ma fired ka na.. Ang sakit nman nito…

  2. Tsk.tsk Ricky shame on you… client call. .. That’s the oldest trick in the book. I can’t believe Maya fell for that line at may ebidensiya pa. Buti na lang mahal ka talaga ng asawa mo kung hindi… baka hindi lang iyan ang maaabutan mo

  3. Grrrrrrr!!! Bwiseeeet kayo Richard & Sandy super nakakainis kayo & Maya please wake up & believe in your instinct. Sobrang sakit sa dibdib ng chapter na to 😦 kelan kaya magiging happy dito si Maya? Thank you sa update.

  4. I never say anything negative ever to any of the stories I’ve read since fom the start but I’m really sorry I think it just affected me soo much of what Richard is doing to Maya and I think I just don’t like him here but hated him to a point where I almost didint finished reading the story then got upset with Maya the way she reacted where she’s still INDENIAL about the whole thing I”m sorry for being blunt about the whole thing I don’t know until when I could hold on and take all of THIS !!!! I hope next chapter will be better where Maya would finally stood up for herself and slap,it on Richard” s face that she doesn’t deserved him please !!!!!!

    • I wonder if the author is a masochist who seem to enjoy her readers suffering from pain and heartbreaks reading this fanfic. How many more chapter to go before we see the ‘resurrected Maya’ meet her truimphant.

  5. Sorry talaga affected lang much para kay Mayabels parang feeling ko eh ako lang naman siya (LOL ) but seriously it was too much for me to take …..

      • Promise Ms Katey dahil pag ang next chapter eh puro pa pasakit Kay Mayabels ng malanding si Sandy at walang pusong si Richard sorry talaga pero GALIT talaga ako sa kanya eh baka magka heart attack na ako so I”ll stick to your words and wait Lang pag may time ng next chapter I hope I would finally have a smile on my face after I read it BTW any date on “After The Wedding ” also my favorite I hope you’ll find time to write some updates on that…..thanks ..sorry ulit at sobrang affected Lang..

  6. Honestly??mgkksakit ako sa puso sa sama ng loob pra kay mayabels….plus pliisss ms writer pede happy nman..

  7. i hope the confrontation will happen in Airport… para mapahiya sa madla si Sandy.. no need to hurt Sandy physically like make sampal her.. masyadong mabait si Maya para manampal.. pero no one knows.. baka may bangis palang tinatago si Mayabels.. hahaha.. gusto ko mapahiya si Sandy at Richard para matauhan… kahaharot!

  8. Maya is not giving up on Richard whom she love. Her patience and faithfulness may be exactly what Richard need to make a complete turnaround.

    And poor Sandy, she fell in love with a wrong guy who could never be hers.

  9. katey thanks for the update 🙂 khit ouchie ouchie ang chapter na to, hoping pa din ako na in favor if their marriage ang mangyari.. sigurado very painful ang mga pagdadaanan nila, but sana maya wil turn out to be a strong woman.. at itong si ticahrd, turuan natin ng leksyon!!! hmmm.,

  10. Grabee naman! Ikaw n tlaga maya ang legal wife haha! At ikaw ricardo ang kapal ng mukha mo hehehehe! Grabe huh maya ikaw n talaga ang martir

  11. This story is too painful. I think it’s time for them to call it quits. There is being strong, and there is being an idiot… Which one do you think is Maya?

    My motto is: huwag mong ipagpilitan ang sarili mo sa taong ayaw sa’yo

    • i think Maya is “to see is to believe” type….pag na witness na nya right in front of her 2 eyes only she’ll realized kung gaano sya ka tanga at martir…how deep the pain is. Wish kong magkabukingan talaga harap harapan with that lantod na Sandy. and Richard will hear nothing from Maya but he’ll always remember Maya’s face full of pain and hurt because of his cheating. Antay ka ng karmo mo Richard…ur so GRRRR!

    • I totally agree with you sis !! Its too much already esp the emotional abused that she takes just to stay married to Richard is too much for me to read I feel like I’m Maya and I could feel all the hurt that he cause because of his INFIDELITY and I’m so hating him for that …..

  12. The One That Got Away-Chapter 9: HongKong
    May 12, 2014 JoChard- Sir Chief&Maya 24 Comments

    Chapter 9: HongKong

    Richard and Maya landed in HongKong in the afternoon. Maya is busy unpacking their clothes in their luggages while Richard keeps busy checking his emails.

    She took her notebook out, excited with her plans for the whole week with him. She smiled as she pictures what might happen on the upcoming days. Shopping, long hours of walking and riding the local transportation with him, surely it’ll be fun!

    Maya glances at her husband and found him occupied with his emails. She slowly approaches him and sat beside him on their bed. “Uh.. Sweetheart, can we go shopping later after dinner? Masaya kasi mamili dito sa gabi di ba?” She asked him sweetly.

    “Uh yes, their night market.”

    “So, oo na?”

    “Yes, yes. I am also bored here”

    Maya shrieks inside her head and made a mental list of the things that she wanted to buy for her family and house helpers.
    ~~

    The couple’s hotel is near the Temple Street Night Market so as soon as the sun goes down, Maya and Richard went to enjoy the night market.

    Yau Ma Tei, Kowloon where the night market is located is filled with people all over the world , the traders have already laid out their wares and the opera singers and fortune tellers begin to emerge when the couple arrived.

    Trinkets, tea ware, electronics, watches, menswear, jade and antiques are scrutinised and haggled over, while claypot rice, seafood, noodles and other treats are consumed with gusto.

    Temple Street Night Market is an enduring example of the festivity of a Chinese market. Maya is happily strolling around while pulling Richard behind her. She was all smiles while Richard kept on looking around, scanning all the people around them. Maya didn’t notice this strange action from her husband, she’s busy stopping and shopping.

    “Ricky! Look! Should I buy this blouse? Cute no?” She asked, and she noticed that Richard is staring on his left side. She shifted her eyes to glance at where he is looking at and only found a group of people chatting.

    “Bakit? Anong meron dun?” She asked him which startled Richard

    “Ah.. W-wala. What were you saying?”

    “Sabi ko, if I should buy this ba?” She held high the blouse.

    “Uh. Yeah.” He answered, his mind still occupied. “Are we done? Madami na din tayo nabili and we have a week here anyway. Just buy that and go back to the hotel for the room service, okay?” He said.

    “Wait. Aalis ka? Saan ka pupunta?”

    “I will.. I just..need to.. Uh.. I will meet a possible client who happens to be here. He’s near na din naman and he said that it’s okay with him if we meet tonight. Don’t worry, saglit lang ako.” He told her. Maya unconvincingly nodded her head. She can’t do anything about it anyway.

    “Alright. But sweetheart, saglit ka lang ha?”

    He nodded and bid goodbye to her before he finally left her. Maya couldn’t explain what she is feeling. There is something wrong. She watches as Richard walks away from her and as the crowd engulfs him and after a few, he is nowhere in sight. Maya could ony heave a sigh and to hope that her instinct was wrong.
    ~~

    “Hi miss, are you alone?” He pulled her by her waist and whispered to her ears which made the lady to blush.

    “Actually no. I am looking for someone. Sabi nya kasi he’s around here somewhere.” She told him sweetly.

    “Oh. Kaya pala nagmamadali syang makita ka. I bet he misses you a lot.” He kissed her on her forehead and embrace her.

    “I miss you, Chard” she hugged him back. “Uh.. Can you come with me? I wanna buy something sana eh. Let’s stroll.”

    “Uhh.. I think that’s not a good idea, Sandy. Why don’t we just hang around your hotel room? Di ba, I already arranged your hotel para malapit lang din.”

    “She’s also shopping here, isn’t she?” Sandy asked casually

    “Yup. So.. Uh.. “

    “It’s alright, Chard. Let’s just go to my room.” She seductively whispered to his ear and gave it a kiss before pulling him away from the crowd.

    Sandy told her co-FA’s that she will be staying in with her relatives in HongKong so she won’t stay with them anymore. It was all Richard’s plan for he wanted to spend some alone time with her as well. And that night, they shared a quality time together while Maya ate alone inside their hotel room staring at the sky wishing to the stars that may her wish be granted. Her long time wish.
    ~~~~

    She is sitting on her side of the bed waiting for Richard. It’s been 4hrs already since he left her for a meeting with his possible client that night. She just can’t help but to think different scenarios that she hates to happen.

    “Richard, asan ka na ba?” She keeps on asking while her thumb is busy typing a message for him.

    She stood up and starts pacing back and forth. Why is it that every night, she is like this? She can’t sleep while he is not beside her. It is really hard when you’re not secured. Simple things will never stop bothering you.
    ~~~

    Around three in the morning, she stirs on her bed. As she slowly open her eyes, she was surprised to find a sleeping Richard beside her. He seems so tired as it looked like when he got back, he just slumped on their bed and sleep. He is still wearing the same polo shirt that he is wearing earlier and his pants and socks were still on. Normally, Richard would sleep in his pajamas.

    Maya examined his face. His eyes were closed. He is so handsome and cute. Like a child peacefully sleeping that you will never want to disturb. His nose that is tempting to be pinched and his lips.. That lips of his that is waiting to be kissed.

    She leans in to give it a soft and gentle kiss but stopped from doing so when her eyes landed on his neck. She immediately sat back and stared at it again.

    She is so sure, it is not hers. There is a kiss mark on his neck. Heck! She racked her mind trying to recall if he is meeting with a girl client but as far as she could remember, he told her that it is a “HE” so it is a guy, right? Did they drank and went to a bar to unwind before going home?

    Maybe he just gave in to his client’s request to drink and to mingle with girls so that he could win his possible client’s trust?? Right, that’s just it, Maya. He is not cheating on you. The last time that he did was way back when you guys are not yet married and they are nothing serious.

    She closed her eyes while trying to convince herself. She sighs. Slowly, she stood up to get a tissue on the comfort room and went back to Richard to wipe that kiss mark on his neck. That bloody lip stick stain. “I won’t give up on us, Ricky. I believe on us. I love you.” She whispered on the sleeping figure of Richard and dozed off to sleep afterwards.
    ~~~~~~~

    happy mom’s day yesterday to our moms and to the moms out there. :’) I am trying to update fast but my sched won’t let me. Sorry. Happy reading anyway. 😀

  13. I cant believe that Richard can be as selfish and self centered.. Grabe ang ginawa niya kay Maya…gaya ng sentiments ng lahat, i hope na magkaharap clang tatlo at magising si Maya sa katotohanan n di cya mahal ni Richard.

  14. hala Ms Kate sorry po ah, nagkamali po ako, di ko po sinasadyang instead na yung comment ko yung ipost ko eh itong story mo yung nacopy at naipost ko po, kasi po, i copy po kasi yung update you at nilipat ko sa word para mapalakihan ko yung mga letters so that i could read it properly po, kasi i can read po yung small teters po, near sighted po kasi ako kaya po ganun everytime na may babasahin po ako ni a ha? i’m really sorry po tlilipat ko po sya sa word para palitan ang font size for me to read it. sorry po talaga, pero i can assure you i am not using your story for something that is not righ. sorry po talaga ha, sobrang sorry po. you can trust me naman po eh, hope this will not be the reason para di na po ako makapagbasa ng works nyo po, sorry po talaga ha?

  15. ito po sana yung comment na ipopooost ko po sana, na di ko alam if anung nangyari maybe di ko lang xa nacopy ng maayos, i typed it sa word din kasi here :

    Hi Ms Kate, thanks for the update po

    My heart is breaking for Maya right now, I felt so so bad for her, I can’t believe there are guys like that, can lie that way, and I can’t believe there girls like Maya and Sandy, na kayang maging martir para lang sa love at kayang dungisan ang dangal at sirain ang respeto sa sarili dahil sa makasarili at sakim na pag mamaha, Ang sakit sakit sa dibdib, para akong sasabog sa sobrang sakit para kay Maya, hayyyyyyy.

    Richard, shame on you, time will come, you will loose Maya into your life, you will all the love and respect of the people around you for treating your wife that way. Timewill come you will regret every pain you caused Maya. You will regret mistreating her that way, taking her for granted, not recognizing her deep love and respect to you. Remember this, karma is just around the corner, wait for its right time to come, when that time comes, magsisisi ka. Bago pa man sana dumating yun, magtino ka na, umayos ka, learn to value things and person that you have now, youuurrr wife, kasi kung hindi, baka tuluyan na s’yang lumayo sa’yo at iwan ka pag sobra na s’yang nasaktan, pag din a n’ya nakayanan lahat. Maswerte ka nga you still have her eh, maswerte ka she loves you too much dahil kung hindi, maybe in a very early stage pa lang ng relationship nyo eh bummmitaw na s’ya. Poor Maya, she does not deserve to have you in her life. Alam mo, you can never ever find someone like your wife, other guys might have envied you because you have the most loving wife, the most wonderful person inside and out, the sweetest, understanding and caring wife, lahat lahat na kahit sobra mo pa s’yang nasasaktan, still, andyan pa din s’ya kahit sobra sobra mo na s’yang binabalewala, still she’s there, waiting for you, hoping and praying that you will soon love her. Ang swerte mo naman and yet you didn’t recognixe that. Naaawa ako sa’yo ngayon pa lang dahil the moment na may makaalam ng mga pinag gagagawa mo, you will surely lost everything, your family’s respect and love, your employees respect towards you, your reputation, and other people’s trust, they will think that they can never trust you kasi sa mismong marriage mo nagagawa mong magsinungaling at mangloko. Most especially you will loose Maya, her love her deep respect in you, her trust. Everything, even your friendship. You will surely regret it. Pagsisisihan mo lahat ng ginagawa mong mali ngayon, ikaw naman ang masasaktan, ikaw naman ang magdurusa, ikaw naman ang magmamahal ng walang katugon and you will surely realize her worth pag tuluyan na s’yang lumayo sa’yo. You will realize that all this time you love her pala, that all this time if ever there is one person you want to spent the rest of your life with is her. You will realize that you cannot live even a single day without her but its too late, really really late.

    Maya_ Please naman Maya pakinggan mo ang instinct mo, wag ka naman magpakamartir jan sa asawa mong yan, he does not deserve to have you, he’s not worthy of your love and respect. Please naman, wake up. Maawa ka sa sarili mo. Iwan mo nalang s’ya, wala s’yang kwenta. You deserne someone who will love you and treat you the way you deserve to be. Wag mo aksayahin ang buhay ant panahon mo sa isang taong walang pakialam at pagmamahal sa’yo. Please lang, wag mo naman sanang hintayin na lalo kang mawasak dahil sa kanya, na pati ikaw mawalan ng respeto sa sarili mo dahil sa ginagawa nya sa’yo. You deserve to be happy, to love and to be love,, hindi yung ikinukulong mo ang sarili mo sa isang relasyon na wala kang napapala kundi sama ng loob, lungkot at sobrang sakit. Wake up please, there are other guys out there na magmamahal sa’yo, yung rerespituhin ka bilang tao, bilang babae, yong tatratuhin ka ng tama. Please lang maawa ka sa sarili mo. Tama na, wag mo nang hayaan na lalo ka pa nyang saktan, lumayo ka nalang, file an annulment and live your life far away from him, be happy and rebuild youself, you desrve i.

    Sandy- umayos ka, imoralidad yang ginagawa mo, sinisira mo ang isang bagay na kahit sino walang karapatang sirain. Ang pinagbuklod ng dyos ay hindi dapat paghiwalayin ng tao, sabi nga sa kasabihan. Dadating ang araw magsisisi ka sa ginawa mo. Wala ka na bang kahihiyan?, wala ka na bang respeto sa sarili mo? Ganyan ba ang ugali ng isang pinagpipitagang FA, yung taong nirerespeto at tinitingala ng lahat. Imoral ka, di ka dapat tularan. One day your company will sure find out your dirty little secret and you will surely loose your job, dinudungisan mo ang magandang reputasyon ng mga FA dahil sa ginagawa mo, mahuhusgahan pati yung mga walang ginagawang kadumihan, kaimoralan. Dahil sa’yo mawawala ang respeto at paghanga ng mga tao na pasahero nyo sa mga FA, kaya bago pa mangyari yun, umayos ka, magtino ka na.

    Ms Kate sorry napahaba comment ko, affected much lang po. Hayyy, request naman po oh, please, pakituruan na ng leksyon si Richard, paki sako si Sandy and make Maya happy. Please po, Thank you nga pop ala sa update ha? Hope hindi ka magsawa na sumulat ng mga stories para sa aming mga adiks, hehehe

    To all the mothers out there, belated happy mother’s day to you. Sabi nga nila huli man daw naihahabol din, stay, loving, caring and wonderful as you are always po 

    Ms Kate/ pwede favour po? Pwede next chapter nap o agad2 please  Thank you po, ingat lagi and God bless 

    P.S. – sa mga kapwa ko adiks, who wants to join me sa pagsasako Kay Sandy para itapon sa pinaka malayong lugar para magtanda? Isama na din natin si Richard pero sa magkaibang lugar para din a sila magkita.

    sorry po ulit Ms Kate ha? huhuhu sorry po talaga 😦

    • Sis Arlyn ang dami naming naka standby pag kailangan mo ng tulong so call ka lang buti na Lang halos lahat tayo pareho ng reaction first time ko nga to read BCWMH fanfic na talagang galit na galit kay SC (LOL )

      • ako din nga eh, hay affected much lang kasi talaga, eh napaka unacceptable naman kasi ng panag gagagawa ni SC dito kaya nakakabigat ng dibdib at nakakahighblood sobra

      • binasa ko ulit ito kanina, hay nag iinit ulit ulo ko sa inis sa kanya promise, ewan ko ba, ang sakit sakit naman kasi sa dibdib ng pinag gagagawa nya eh hay

  16. Heartbreaking, nakakainis!.. I dnt know why that happens, if I’m Richard i cnt be at peace doing that.. Girls are victims here.. Sana mabawi na sa next chapter..
    Thanks Ms Katey!

  17. I don’t know why I am so affected with this story.. but i really feel so bad for maya and I so so so hate richard right now… as I’be read the other comments, tama sila I want richard and sandy to be humiliated in public for them to learn their lesso. And as for maya I want to see her rise as a strong woman..sana next chapter matauhan na si maya

  18. Ms Kate,ang sakit naman.Maya makinig ka ng konti sa instinct mo kasi regalo sa inyo yan kaya make the most out of it and act accordingly.Alam mo naman na kapag nasusukol ng asawa ang kalaguyo ay ang isa nag baback out either natakot sa complications or ikaw ang mag back out just to give way to his happiness.

  19. Whewwwww!… Ms Kate araw araw kitang inaantay sa wakas nag update ka din.. Salamat

    Maya gising gising din pag may time.. Sana makipag annul kana tapos enjoy your life.. Sana dumating na si mr. Right tapos pa mukha mo Kay Richard na Nakita mo na yung para Sayo.. Tapos ikaw naman Richard lunukin mo lahat ng sakit na ginawa mo sa asawa mo.. Tapos si sandy naman ei bitayin na natin.. Wala eii.. Sarap tusukin ng ballpen.. Nako Kung ikaw magiging pasyente ko tatakutin kita at papaiyakin kita ng bongga..

    Salamat ulit ms Kate .. God bless sa ojt

    P.s sana si James ung mr. Right Nya ..

  20. Mis katey thank you sa update pero sa tutuo lang very much affected ako like the rest of us. Likewise I wish that Maya will wake up and realize that di na uso ang martir, and si Richard naman (how I hate him right now!), will realize that 1. Maya is deserving to be loved and respected, 2. Ang mga babaeng tulad ni Sandy will have no qualms na kumabit kahit kaninong lalaki at baka iwan at palitan din siya and 3. Laging nasa huli ang pagsisisi……Richard, don’t wait until you lose Maya, walang pangalawang gloria sa pag a-asawa lalo pa at ang simula ninyo ni Sandy ay galing sa makasalanang relasyon, you will never have the happiness you think you have found with Sandy dahil meron kang inargrabyadong tao, the one that you married in the eyes of God and men.
    Oooops sorry miz katey napahaba ang comment ko, sobrang affected lang!

  21. blockbuster ang comments section sa chapter na ito….Ms. Katey…wag mo ng patagalin please…marami rami na kaming malapit ng lagutan ng hininga har har har

  22. Huhu 😭😭😭😭 di talaga ako maka get over dito ang sakit talaga sa dibdib promise hanggang sa pagtulog naiisip ko tong story na to 😩😩😩😩😩😭😭😭😭😭 Thank you Ms. Katey

  23. Hu hi hi Di na ako dagdag for affected comment, pwede po ba ms Kathy next chapter Kung San maya will display her kind heart character while dealing with Richard and sandy Kung sana ma realize ni Richard what he about to loose….Na HB (high blood) ako sa chapter na Ito….oops na pa comment tuloy ako

  24. Super duper kakakainis! Still I say kudos to the writer because marami ang affected including me! It just show how good you are! I would still wait on how you could build Maya’s personality to make her a strong woman and a better person that Richard have not foreseen that she could be and for Richard to run after and BEG to the max… as the title says “the one that got away”. Sandy should know better than play as the other woman. She herself have just experienced a lot of heartache… bilis naman yata makalimot ng babaeng etitch!!! grrrrr! Isako!!!

  25. I’d like to know what is Maya’s background in this story careerwise. Seems she has no other interest outside of her marriage with Richard. She appears to be a boring housewife. The missing piece is also the roles of the parents of Richard and Maya. How do they fit in in the lives of the couple, are they involved in any business arrangements? Richard was faithful to Maya until he met Sandy. Richard pursued Sandy and not the other way around. The chemistry developed between the two of them and its something that can’t be help most of the time. Let’s see how the situation with these three individuals will be resolve.

  26. ako… payag ako na ‘wag na magkatuluyan si maya at richard sa story na ‘to! sana lang maya will have a courage to move on….

  27. Ms. KAtey parang tgal yta ng next chapter…..update k nmn plssssssssssssssss.Have a nice weekend.sna dame ka ma update.

  28. Hindi pa ba kakanta si Angeline Quinto dito! 🙂 hahaha

    “Habang ikaw ay naririto sa dibdib
    Ipaglalaban ko ating pag-ibig
    Sa harap ng paghihirap at pasakit
    Ako’y handang magtiis
    Hangga’t ‘di kita lubusang maintindihan
    Aaminin ko ang pagkukulang
    Hanggang kailan kita mamahalin
    Tanong ng puso ngayo’y naninimdim”

  29. daming comment and ang hahaba…agree ako mostly sa mga comments.. exciting malaman kung paano ma iinlove si richard kay maya at kung paano lulusutan ni Maya ang sitwasyon nito ngayon..

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